The Script
EPISODE 1: "One Tough Cookie" | Pilot
On the verge of the bakery closing permanently, Rachael is forced to handle a family emergency and rescue her stranded mother at Happy Head Shop. Jenny’s car accident leads to a huge cookie order that will literally save them from ruin. Rachael and Jenny bungled the delivery and lose the game saving order. Brad comes through in the end to save the day.
On the verge of the bakery closing permanently, Rachael is forced to handle a family emergency and rescue her stranded mother at Happy Head Shop. Jenny’s car accident leads to a huge cookie order that will literally save them from ruin. Rachael and Jenny bungled the delivery and lose the game saving order. Brad comes through in the end to save the day.
Official Analysis
"I'm Never Done" is a family comedy with a cast of quirky characters that will appeal to audiences of all ages. The clueless former MLB player/pot dealer dad, the snappy hippy grandmother, and the strong, overworked, over-competent mom are all well-developed and relatable characters, and the same can be said for the rest of the supporting cast."
Santa Barbara International Screenplay Awards
Santa Barbara International Screenplay Awards
"Readers can easily visualize each character and look forward to seeing them again in future installments."
Santa Barbara International Screenplay Awards
Santa Barbara International Screenplay Awards
"The world-building is solid, as the Silicon Valley setting plays an integral role in the story. The Sweet Bytes Bakery feels real and authentic, and it makes for a solid workplace comedy setting."
The Black List.
The Black List.
"I'm Never Done is a funny, sarcastic, snappy script. The dialogue is excellent and shapes the dry, quirky tone."
Wiki Screenplay Contest
Wiki Screenplay Contest
"A key aspect of the dialogue is the conversations. These are superbly constructed"...
Los Angeles International Screenplay Awards
Los Angeles International Screenplay Awards